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for A passionate night in history

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person Tourach
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I guess that means that Marle is the decendant of not only Ayla but Chrono too.
person aww
schedule March 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it
person ???
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the best I've read. I'm serious. It was so cute with all the loveness, and "Ayla found strong man". ^^ Great work
person Kir
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This is pretty good. But I got to wonder, is this going to alter their present, or is this what ment to happen? Don't answer, it's just some personal thinking. But this is still good none-to-less.
person Mykell
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. Could use more details and it could be double-checked for errors, though.
person Mykell
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, could use some spell- and grammar-checking.