AFF Fiction Portal
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story; love the pairing, the descriptions... not to mention the plot! Excellent writing makes this a great read. Now if only you could have not called Sakura "Juni/Juli" so many times!
person Dark Stacey Gardner
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have a sick and twisted mind, man, and thats what makes you rock
person DrDumbass
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how nice. To have a balance of eroticism without descending into complete PWP. Interesting.
person Shot of Tequila
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, Charles! Probably not I s I should have read right before heading out for class, but awesome anyway. Talk to you later!
--Lea