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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story and its sequal. I lov all of your stories! It's not just porn without a plot. It's got some real love in it. :)
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!! Simply Great!!!
I love this fics in witch the sexual term about a special race is told. But I didn't like the fact that Kokoris lives only 25 years! How sad!!
I think that, in the game, they live forever (Unless they get killed), after all, Kokoris are based on Peter Pan. Did you know?
I love this fics in witch the sexual term about a special race is told. But I didn't like the fact that Kokoris lives only 25 years! How sad!!
I think that, in the game, they live forever (Unless they get killed), after all, Kokoris are based on Peter Pan. Did you know?
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
8/20
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm....
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's not that bad, a good story. It fits easily in the Zelda-serie, except the mature concept. I don't think they'd like that at Nintendo.
But beside the mature concept, it's the best story I ever red. And I've red some stories.
I've been trying to write a story myself, but I could never write anything like this.
You may have to be a Zelda-fan or know something about Zelda, this is not just for evverybody, you need to be a Zelda-fan.
Concept:8 Idea:8 Story:9
But beside the mature concept, it's the best story I ever red. And I've red some stories.
I've been trying to write a story myself, but I could never write anything like this.
You may have to be a Zelda-fan or know something about Zelda, this is not just for evverybody, you need to be a Zelda-fan.
Concept:8 Idea:8 Story:9
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa first child on child fic I read. This fic is a bit freaky.
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Needs to be spell/grammar checked, for one...Not to bad a story, and I know you needed to break canon with thme, me, since the Kokiri technically come from the Great Deku Tree...anyways, the soelling and grammar were a bit off, and the sex scene went too quick, in my opinion.
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NAVI YOU SUCK!!
How dare you break them up!!! heh heh. Good write.
How dare you break them up!!! heh heh. Good write.
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April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. I think you could add more chapters to if if you wanted to. It definitely inspired me to write another chapter. Tell me what you think about it and I'll keep reviewing whateve you post too ^_^
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March 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good I suspected a relationship there anyways and (green hair is so cool)