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I liked the roles that Faustus and Kain took in this fan fiction. The fact that Faustus is playful and eager and Kain austere and cold. And I know that's not the way that Kain creates vampires and so it's not really important for the fan fiction as we don't even know what kind of relationship Kain and Faustus had. The advices I'd give you are to re-check your work because there are some incomplete words and also clear up your description sometimes it wasn't really clear to picture out what you're trying to describe. Anyways don't give up ;) it's good

that was a very interesting story...i have played Blood Omen II but that's about it, so i dont know much about the LoK series...but keep up the good work and add more chapters, i will look forword to reading them! =)

Very nice- and very well written!! ^_^ Faustus deserved that!