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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
personly i woulnt have posted this, i would have used this as a base then put some effort into it. As it is, it is rushed, bad pacing, poor descriptions and its not in character. True i can see Kain having sex with with his prey but not oftern and not with the attitude shown here, its just not Kains style, this is more a rushed personal fantacy using Kains face than a real peice of writing. If this could be redone with a lot more time and thought put into it, not to mention a replay of the games to look at Kains character, this could be a decent fic. It would be a heck of alot darker than this, the cheep attempt at humer just doesnt fit with the subject matter, the only hummor that belongs in a fic like this is the kind that a character may find amusing but would shock or horrify the reader.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not really Kain's style, but I like it. Those girls were two damn sexy to kill them without a little sex with one or two of them. :)
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Most people misunderstand a Vampires true nature. For all vampires Lust and killing go hand in hand. Most vampires enjoy sexual realtion with there prey before they burtally kill them. This was nothing but a true brilliant statement from someone who knew what he was talking about. All though in the game water hurts vampires. That was very false. At least he kept everything true. my appluase to your work.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, personal fantasy.... written in two minutes....very interesting.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally in character for kain scarily enough even being written in two minutes.
Not bad. Review my soul reaver fic would ya though I warn ya it happens to be about sixty bazillion times longer then yours.
Peace, Flamekaat. Ps ya know ya want my reviewer award it's so pretty. the first awardee has one up on her page at geocities.com/blackjack_kat
Not bad. Review my soul reaver fic would ya though I warn ya it happens to be about sixty bazillion times longer then yours.
Peace, Flamekaat. Ps ya know ya want my reviewer award it's so pretty. the first awardee has one up on her page at geocities.com/blackjack_kat
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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Some texts just make you wonder why the author felt the need to share their idea with others. I, for one, don't get how rape can be treated as a laughting matter... The story is sick, insulting and badly written. (And it seems that Kain is just in denial about his sexuality... :P )
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's why I think this story has only 3 stars. Everyone else see Kain as very gay. I mean, does he act gay in the game? NO!
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg lmao