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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I diffenatly look forward to seeing more of your works with my favorite succubus *Smiles*
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its rare to find akstakstalkers fanfic..even one that explains gam game! Keep it up its interesting..even with the other shows in it too!
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December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. The formatting is a little bit problematic (although that may be a browser issue) and the sex scene is not exactly searing. However, attention is paid to consistency of characterization, story structure, framing, and so on. I wouldn't rank it highly as porn, but as fanfiction in general goes this is of above-average quality.
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, great structure and a great plot. Keep writing!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty interesting story which basically means i like it and i like how you have the LBG components in your story. I can't wait for the next chapter and i hope that it comes soon. Also, i love the lchapchapters personally i like to read em when they are long.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was damn good! There should be motoritories like this! Keep up the good w W.X