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for Tainted Eyes

by HotaruReborn

person Callisto
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
0.0 oh my, it's gettin' better and better!
YAY! Cloud's in the story yay he's my fav character ^_^
Keep the updates coming!

Oh there is one thing confusing me.... You said several times * keyblade master * to
Riku... but Sora is a keyblade master too, right? >.< me is confused...
person Red_eyed_demon
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
* blows Kairi up *
aaaah i feel much better now, heehee

update soon! and plz keep Sora alive
person Seda
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oeeewwww this is good, nice written! me want more!
person Callisto
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
of course we can bare with it, we have too hehe ^_^ Great chappie!

oh and plz..........DON'T KILL SORA!!!!
i know i kind of hate in him in the game for
being so annoying and childish..V_V...but in you're story he's cool and he doesn't
derserve(?) to die...

update soon! can't wait for more!
person Liebchen
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kairi you Bitch!!! I hate her! Why can´t you kill her?? Please just kill her! Her and Livion and his men... please bring Selphie, Tidus and Wakka back!! I wuv them so much...
Oh, and when Livion or any of his men dares to touch Squall, Xell, Seifer or anyone else (Espasilly Riku or Sora) I´m going to kill them!! I swear!
Please go on!! This is really one of the best storys I´ve ever read...

~~Liebchen~~
person Kaika
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Riku, I winced reading that last chapter. So, Sora will be jumping into the story soon? Woot!
person Callisto
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
waaiiiii! So good! heh, i really starting to like this, and i'm surely going to follow this to the end!

Sora's coming along soon? YAY I hope Sora cuts Livion into pieces with his micky mouse keyblade ( yea right!
like that will scare Livion ) ¬_¬

Oh well, continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kaika
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice, keep going. Oooo... does Sora help Riku in anyway?
person Lunare
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Riku. Please update soon. *chibified* Me wanna know what happens! Your story is gooood^^ . I hope that Sora and Riku can escape... but what about Kairi? 'n Selphie, Tidus and Wakka?! Wah, update!
person Red_eyed_demon
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG...... Selphie, wakka, Tidus 0_0

Update soon!