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more..More..MORE!!!! OMG HURRY YOUR KILLIN ME HERE

oh....my.......WAAI this was good ^_^ Ah continue soon,
poor Sephy-sama T_T he was SOO sweet...

THANK YOU you didn't kill Sora. I LOVE YOU!!!! I never expected to see Sephiroth in this story but i ver very good that you put him in it. At first I thought Yuffie was Clouds secret friend but Sephiroth is better :P Poor Riku he has been through so much in such little time I feel really sorry for him. When are you going to kill that stupid slut Kairi??? hehe sorry just had to ask I can't stand her! Very good chapter nice cliffhanger aswell I can't wait for the next chapter but I have to :( update soon!!

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Caska

This is really good! I have never read a KH story that was this good. I'm really curious about what is going to happen next so you better update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Caska

Oh wow. Your first fanfic?! This is absolutely wonderful, and coming along so beautifully. Your chapters end in a way that makes me want to pull out my hair and beg to know what's going to happen, especially Chapter 13. Poor kawaii lil Sora trying to defend his love... I also liked how you threw in the other Final Fantasy characters. Mmm, Vincent and Squall. ^_^ I do hope we'll be able to see Selphie, Tidus, and Wakka again. I love those guys.

Oh, by the way! If you'd like someone to be your beta, just hit me on AIM (SN is 'Spicy Gambit') or MSN (the__kate@hotmail.com) ^-^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Sora * dies together with him * Okay, he was evil for awhile but he don't derserve this!
aghh why did you kill him : Sniffle :
Continue soon, while i continue to cry ^_-

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayness! another chapter!

ACK SORA * smacks him in the face * now return to normal, idiot! you're hurting Riku!!!! T_T
And i still hate Kairi! :P

Update soon!

Wow...this is very impressive. It's like you've taken all the aspects of darkness in reality that Disney was too afraid to put into the game. Plus seeing Vincent in chapter ten made me squeal like the fangirl I am. :D You're writing style is very clean, I just spotted a couple errors, the kind spell-checker can make if you're not too careful with it. One careful proof-reading can take care of those. I'd also like to applaude you for not making this story sound clichéd given the subject matter. On a less serious note: after eleven chapters of so much character abuse, I'm really looking forward to seeing some justice dealt out to Livion. X3

Gah! You have got to stop ending your chapters in such cliffhangers! Seriously, it's torture. Although, I suppose that would be appropriate to the story, in some weirdly logical way... But it's still not nice! Please, please, please, update SOON! I'm just dying to see what happens next. And such an unexpected twist, what happened with Sora. Keep it coming! ~Kaia

.........I have a hard time not to kill you -_- hehe! ^_^
Aw poor Sora! I hoped he would kill Kairi but too bad, she's still alive

another chapter well done!
can't wait for the next one!