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that was the shit right there. wow wh twi twist of events. keep up the good work. nice touch with the hallow baostion stuff too. truly.

oh yea, so im guessing that the young man with the pretty eyes is the one who knows Aeris, Cloud and Sephiroth... hrm... who could it be. amazing how this ff and kh stuff goes. wow.

YES! UPDATED! UPDATED! UPDATE AGAIN! UPDATE AGAIN!

Poor Bastion he didn't deserve that. Now who could be the person who is thinking about Aeris, Cloud and Sephiroth? Thats a toughie.................maybe it's Zack that would be cool. Oh well I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. UPDATE SOON or I'll get angry :P

I'm going to go insaaaaaaaaaaaane! Update! Update! Dark...Angsty...GOOD! AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! I thrive on your story! It's my life! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!

another really good chapter!!!!!! i think its great that the story is not just about Riku and Sora anymore but also Squall, Sephiroth, Vincent and Cloud and ofcourse Aeris but I never really liked her :P I hope you update soon. (you better!)

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Caska

................WHOA! this is surely something... Livion has a heart? ^_^
Couldnt see that one coming, hehe
Whee this is getting SOOO good, MAN can't wait for more!
aw continue soon ok?

About the cliffhangers: one of those lives being ruined would definately be mi It\ It's enough to give a person a nervous twitch, waiting oh-so-impatiently to see what happens next. And the deaths of Livion's three compatriates...totally out of left field. What a plot twist! Never would have seen thae coe coming in a trillion years. And you carried it off so nicely, too. Anyway, just wanted to say, I'm still enjoying the story very much (except for the cliffhangers, naturally). Keep those chapters coming!

Dude... Thats all I can say is dude... This story is so intense but could see it happening if Kingdom Hearts wasn't a disney video game. The story line is so perfect, so great. Even though I'm not even done it I though I'd write this before I become compleatly speachless. Even though alot of it... is... sick... But its so interesting at the same time, like some sick fantasy you wouldn't want to speak to with anyone. Like Kairis fantasy, something you wish for no one to know, till she broke. You know... She always did seem a little to innocent... I could see her being a compleate whore, I really can. And the way to describe every character is perfect, everything is set exacatly to the characters. I could even have dreams of one of my Kingdom Hearts characters fitting into this story... But would you call those dreams or nightmares? Thats a good question. It brings so many ideas to my mind, kind of wishing I could recreate this story and add my own character. That would make it interesting, lol. But I couldn't do that without writers permission of course. That would like taking someones copy write. But its funny, a fanfic, of a fanfic, even better. lol. But yet again, great story.

you have a real talent for writing. and the story line is easy to follow. its so nice to finally read something i can get into