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That was the best story I have ever read. I really loved it and I'll be checking for those sequels I can't wait to read them. It really sucks that you are done with this story but every story must have an ending right? Keep writing cause you now have a fan for life!

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Caska

omg i love you!!!!!! that was the greatest story i have ever heard... dude i beat kindom hearts and i was really into it. im glad i found a good fic about it and not just riku and sora go at it doggy style and crap like that. love your work. looking forward to your new fics. keep up the good .
Su.

Okay, I only recently became a fan of KH fanfics, mainly because my girlfriend was reading them first. And I've also never posted a review, because I find it usually rather pointless. However, I changed my mind for your fic. You are a fabulous writer, and for your first fic, you've done an amazing job. I very rarely see this good of a fic anywhere on the web. Keep up writing, and e-mail me when you have another fic up. I'm looking forward to another great story.

i feel so bad.. its not fair :*( i didnt want that to happen.. i wanted them to geay. ay. DUDE IF YOU DONT BRING THEM BACK I'LL BE VERY ANGRY. *wimpers*

HOW COULD YOU????? How could you kill Squall, Sephiroth, Zack, Vincent and Cloud???? I must say that this chapter was really good even though I'm really depressed now that you killed them you better bring them back or I'll push you through that door into the darkness muhahahahahahaha okay not scary I know :P You better update soon I want to read the rest!!!!

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Caska

Holy mother of god! That was very unexpected! This isn't going to be a tragedy where Riku will forever be "consumed by the darkness", and Sora and co. will have perished for good in the black void beyond the door, and basically the whole "bad guys win" scenario? I can assume that witur cur creative mind there's a little more to it than it seems...a little plot twist that you'hrowhrow in sooner or later. But who am I to be giving ideas? I can only wonder what you have in store for the next chapter...*grin*

~roan

Wow... great story. Simply unbelieveable. I refuse to believe this is your first, though. It's amazing.

*Pelts HR with pocky sticks* What is it with you and cliffhangers?!? Dang it, and just when I thought I could make it through one lil chapter without wanting to break something because of the suspense... This story just keeps getting better. I also like how some of the back story is gradually being brought to light. I hate Livion with a passion, but I couldn't ask for a better, more three-dimensional villain. I think my only question would be: did ol' Livy ever have a body of his own? I don't remember if the one he had when he met Bastion was his own or not... Anyway, another gold star for you, and HURRY and get that next chapter out! Can't wait to see what happens. ;)

wow very proud, very proud. good job with the new chapter... thought it was all over and thati could finally check out the happily ever afer stuff. guess not tho huh? jesus kairi! i love you but die already!

ZACK!?!?!?!? * falls off her chair * WHOA that was surely a BIG suprise! couldnt see that one coming ^_^
I'm glad he's also in this story since he's still one of my fav characters in FFVII!!

WAAAH CLOUD no! he can't die! And sephy-sama dont heal him or you will die too :P Zack have to heal him!

Aww continue soon!

and please..................KILL KAIRI, MAKE HER SUFFER! etc etc, i really hate her :P