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for Tainted Eyes

by HotaruReborn

person Rachel
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You definitely have some major, major issues...
person SiriusReborn
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there are disclaimers at the top of each chapter. If you know you don't like that type of thing, don't read any further. It's simple. =P
person SiriusReborn
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nah, I'm fine. ^.^ Some of us just dive deeper into our darker sides than others, but everyone has one. I enjoyed writing this, many people enjoyed reading it. I don't think any of us iss issues. Now please, if you have anything more to say on the matter, email me. To imply that I need help also implies that people who enjoyed the story need help. And I would prefer not to see that in my notes.
person Rachel
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wasn't a flame. It was just the first thing that came to mind after I read your story. Maybe you should seek counsel. Ra.
person Sakura1867
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is a very good story. I love the sex scenes, Lemons'. Please write more and include more lemons if you can.
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story! love it
person Legendary Dream girl
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. This was such a wonderful fic! I really wish there was more to it. I mean reading this was just like watching a movie. You put so much description and thought into the storyline and scenery it's just amazing! Plus I love cliffhangers! Thank you so much for writing this. You've so made my day.
person Suicide Jane
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bravo... take a bow.
person Nicole
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow..I have to say..your story was one of the best I\readread. Your writing style could make the simplest plot interesting and extremely engaging! ^_^ I'm going to shower you with complements now!! first, you have perfecto grammar!! this makes moi very happys. Very nicely written. second, You made your chapters long and you (when u did) seem to leave a cliffhanger right where something really surprising..like that part where everyone thought sora just had his heart ripped from his chest..!! that scared the hell outta me..@@...that didn't happen tho...anywho...lastly, You describe the point of views wonderfully...but I mostly would like to say you are going to get somewhere with your writing..if u want to you WILL...you got talent...well..seeing how I rambled..@@...hehe buh byes I hope u write more stories!
person Callisto
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. I liked it from the beginning till end =) i'll really hope you write more stories in the future so i'll can read them too :)

Great job! and thaaaaaaank you for creating it! catch you later i hope!