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This story is incrediable. I absolutely love it. I am a major fan of Kairi (dont hold it against me) but even I wanted to see her tortured and killed by Sora, Riku and everyone else. I hope you will write more Kingdom Hearts stories, because this one is so good.

uhhhh.... if u ever do another story dont have so much fucking rape in it, jesus christ!!!!!
but uh all-in-all it was okay. i didnt like the gayness between sora and riku, they have enough of those already. Write more! u have a very disgusting,disturbed, strange image about kingdom hearts.

I just wanted to let you know that this...was probably...the MOST awesome fic I've read on this sight. It's at least up there in the top couple. It was so great and not just senseless porn that people seem to be prone to write (which is okay, so don't take offense THOSE people...lol) This just had so deep a plot and so much work and thought behind it I was honestly amazed by it. It's definately going in my RecReading list, and I'm making a vast majority of my friends and buddies read it as well, so don't be surprised if you see a multitude of new reviews and such pouring in. Seriously...This was awesome, there were no major discrepencies or flaws or anything, you did a very very nice job and I'll definately be watching out for you. Thanks for the great read.

Me Again...Just waiting for a chapter update on Eternal Fall, and I figured its about time to review here! XD This was the first one out of your fics I read...Couldnget get it out of mind..Read it in one go...SOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!! Wow. One thing I really loved about about Tainted Eyes was how even though you didn't have AerisXCloud as a couple, you didn't portray the other one as really horrible and hate-able. You know...lol I can't explain what I'm getting at... But I just thought it was really swell how Aeris could be with Zack, and Cloud could be Sep Sephy with them all being such great characters at the same time...'Cause ya know...Other authors get all petty and will purposely make a character be all heinous and hated just because they don't like the thought of them being coupled with their fave character..Am I ranting? I apologise...I hope I got my point across without sounding like too much of a retard XD By the way, I love all the couplings you have in your fic...^_^ Oh oh...Everyones so brave and noble...and admirable...YAY!! This fics so dark and so rewarding...OH YOUR JUST SO AWESOME!! *glomps*
~Hailz

I really enjoyed fic fic. it took a while to read but it was well worth it. You're cliff hangers were great. and i loved how you portrayed characters specially Seph and Riku. i agree with you on ur comments about Riku in ch. 20 He's not evil. and i thought it was great how the story turned out to be a prequil. i suck at reviews so i'm just gonna say i loved the story. can't wait for sequils and i'll definety have to read your ff7 fic!

This is utterly....creepy. But its fantastically good. Bravo!

What happened to Sora being Keyblade master too? Is he gonna save the day at all?

Before this fanfiction, I hadn't really enjoyed reading much yaoi, but the way you wrote and detailed every aspect made everything a fun read. The fact that you made this a prequel to Kingdom Hearts which ties into the game itself is outstanding. Definitely waiting for whatever you write next! I have to ask though, since you had M/M pairings and M/F pairings, why not any F/F pairings?

Well, I'll admit, I was raising my squick shields when I read the description, but once I started it I had to read it through.

You are a goddess, and I must worship you. *bowsmuchly*

speechless, that's what i am.

this is an astounding story. and i'm really glad you wrote riku out like this. not dissing sora (though i dislike him for some reason) or anything though.

you had me going on some chapters, especially when the page is loading -slowly- i like the portrayals you've done for all characters. and i especially like selphie's part in the garden. it was a terribly touching moment, and extremely sad too x_x; d00d. if this actually happens before KH, riku took the brunt of it all, man. poor bishie, he's my fave bishie of all. and GAH. some of the lemon scenes were just TOO painful >_O!! *winces cringes* but those didn't deter me to stop finding out the ending. and i'm glad i didn't stop reading.

i'm a little disappointedthe the ending though. not that it was bad or rushed, or anything like that. it just seemed unresolved since after this story line, we jump right into KH. and i feel like you should write more, as if after the KH story *coughsequelcough*

livion is a sexy name, by the w



*worships worships*