rate_review Reviews

(sigh) man was that one of the longest stories I have ever read. I have to say that was one of the greatest stories I read so far since "Catcher in the Rye". I give you a big thank you for making suck a story. It had everything in it. Romance, drama, and so on and so on. I'm just tired at the moment from non stop reading. It took me a while to read this but it was worth it. This story receives a 10 out 10 even though it had some mispelled words but it didn't matter. I consire your writting to be number one on my list. Thanks again. I look foward to more creation like these.

After finishing Eternal fall *sniff-sniff* I had to come read this one. Ohh this was so dark and angsty *coos* I loved it. Wow, wow and wow!!Oh your original characters were do dark, and well kinda hot also *shifty eyes* Another great fan-fiction from you. This was a really good story to read, had me at the edge of my computer chair a few times!! Great job!!

Wow... What an amazing story. You stayed true to the characters, added just enough goodies to make it more irresistible to read. Not that you had to try hard the story was awesome from the start.. This whole story was definitely one that made me cry, laugh get angry and nearly jump out of my seat with joy. I often wondered what the KH characters would do in a situation similar to the events you put them through in your story, and I STILL wonder what the heck is going on with Riku, Sora and Kaire. So many questions and not enough answers. In the first Kingdom Hearts game Riku gave in to the darkness to save Kaire... right, and Sora fought for her as well as all the worlds as well, but you never really get to see Kaire’s side of things. What are her feelings between the two boys and who would she chose? Just like the TOTAL mystery surrounding Kingdom Hearts 2. *Sigh* Anywho I just wanted you to know that you ROCK! Please keep writing I can’t wait to see what else you’ll have up next.

I keep reading it, and it's still great!! Kudos ^_^

Wow. This was really.. really.. good. I'm usually not into the noncon stuff (Note: I said usually) but I really enjoyed this one. ^_^ Speically since you put Vincent in it. Very good job. I loved how you thought up Livion's name, very creative.

Ah hah! It makes much more sens now. Loved the ending! Still a great story, though it dosen't have as many gut-wrnching point in it as the other one ((The Sceens with Seph and Vince still haunt me, they're so amazing)) As for the Kingdom Hearts re-write, only is you play Ansem as well as you did Livion, who was amazingly evil. I think Ansem has the same ability to be that evil within him. And I would like to see you play with it. I'd read it either way of course, amazing story. Keep it up!

I'm vaughly confused, is the story supossed to end with Sephiroth casting Phiniox? Or did a chapter get deleated along the way? Please E-mail me if there is more, as I really do desire closure for this story. It's a really good story. Dark, Twisted, and Almost Mind Boggling at times, but good, very good. If Riku is Pure Light, how is it he can be possed by Livion? *Still puzzled, and feeling like she didn't read the entire thing* Oh well, good story, I hope to see a Sequel. Later Days.

I have to say i read this fic months and months ago, i even read it twice i love it so much, everything you say about riku, i truly believe he hgas always been my favourate character, personally i always though sora to be weak...but thats just me, in the actaul game im actaully annoyed that we dont get to play riku as the keyblade master, but apparently in kingdom hearts 2 that comes out over in england march 2005 sometime, hes a kick ass character! i just cant wait! (till we set sail) lol. So anyway i just want to thank you for this story, i will always remeber it. (I know i sound really sentemental, but i really cant help it, lol)
So thank you!
:D

Me xxx

Holy shit... I can't tell you how much this fic actually affected me... I was crying in the last fhapthapters... the way you described each of the characters and how they felt as they fell through the doors... especially Vincent, Cloud and Sephiroth... damn. I was crying for about five minutes... and then when you went to the part where people were coming back through the door on the islands, there was a really bad ache in my chest when Wakka started talking about what Riku had done... it could have been heartburn, but I doubt it. ;)

Anyway... The details in this story were fantastic... I don't believe I've seen so much pointless smut in one fic before... okay, it wasn't pointless, but there was a lot of it. ^_^ I enjoyed every minute though... the torture scenes had me wincing, and I felt soo sorry for Riku for most of this thing... lol. I really felt for the characters, which basically means you did a really, really, REALLY good job on this fic... Yad mad my emotions on a real roller coaster, which yet again proves what a wonderful job you did on this... you can bet that I'll be reading pretty much anything else you write. ^^

The story was very enrapturing... I had to read straight through it because I didn't want to stop..! It's now four in the morning, just to prove a point. ^^ Took me roughly three hours to read... maybe four, I can't really remember when I started. lol.

oops... sorry about that. Hit enter before I was done...

Anyway... I guess that I just wanted to tell you how much I truely enjoyed this story... *glomps* I would love to save it to my hard drive, if that's okay with you. ^^ 'Cause I never want to lose track of it!!!