rate_review Reviews

It was a good story overall but there was a slight blooper.
In the 3rd or 4th chapter u told us that there was no escape. In the later chapters, they found an escape which led to a forest... by Aerith... etc.

I was actually wondering why you left Yuffie out, you did have most of the FF7 Cast in there and you gave a good reason for Tifa, but what of Barret too?
You did a great story by the way.

0o0.......I'm mortified.......that is all i can say.....

Wow... What can I say I love your story!!! This was actually the first sora/riku story I have read and to this day remains my one and only favorite. You put them both trough hell, but somehow it all works out in the end.. I think I even cried a few times when reading this, not meany stories 'or any for that matter' do that to me. Thank you for writing such a good story! I also loved Tainted Eyes too. ^_^

All I can say is that this was marvously well done. I throughly enjoyed it and do hope you decide to add more to this amazing tale. You managed to wrap up everthing neatly in the end and it was nice to see Riku as the main charictor. Personaly I found Sora to be a bit of a push over, though I only ever made it up until after Hollow Baston, Having a hard time beating those damn new bosses. Anyhow, once again great job.

;Sobs: your one of those people that end it at a bad spot!!!! ;cries loudly: YET I LOVE IT!! :sniff: best god damn story i have ever read on this site!!! i honor you!!! regards from my friend also me and her had a big discussion on it last night!
see you!!! well done!!

ooooooo. well, i guess everything turned out alright^^ Found all of the extra stuff very interesting. you rock!!
;yawns:w ell, see ya. gotta go to the evil doctor.

hi, i just LOVED this storie....it was so wonderful it made me cry so much. but i was wondering what sepheroth was actually signing. is it a real song? if so maybe you can tell me what he is saying in english and like tell me where i can get it. i love this storie, i will send it to all my friends.

It's not an actual song. I'll have to look up what it means again! It's actually in Elvish, which for some odd reason is an established language for LoTR. ^-^; In other words, I looked up the words myself on a translation site and made the song up. When I remember where I put the translation, I'll tell you what it means!

All i have to say is that this is one of the best stories i have ever read in my life time on a fanfiction site. i was reading it to midnight last night and i couldnt take my eyes away. Then the dreams came when i went to sleep, but I thought it was kind of funny it effected me in that way. Your words and story are powerful. The plot is amazing, and almost every chapter keeps me at the edge of my seat <---heart was pounding.
Spelling glitches are okay. I see that happen to alot of people on this site.
I haven't finished the story yet so i printed out some chapters to read while I'm on vacation. I'll review you when I get back and finish it cause i only could print out 4. ( i forgot which chapters.)
And all i have to say is, as guilty as i feel, i would probrally end up like kairi...:whistles innocently: it sucks that i had to admit that. lol.
-Fire