rate_review Reviews

I really like the way you're writing your story thus far. You're not throwing in sex scenes just for the heck of it. You can speed up the pace a bit, but don't prono the story. Can't wait to see how the rest turns out.

Huh, one of the very few stories that I've ever read in first person and enjoyed. Hope your claim that it gets better isn't hot air, though I really doubt it will be =)

alright i thought that i should let you know, that this fic, is the most sick, twisted thing i have ever read, i can tell that you are most definitely a guy. i cant believe that you would dare to put christie and leifang together! this is just disgusting, and i thought that i should let you know! ew!! disgusting!

I think this fanfic is great as well. The lead up chapters were good, though a little long. The enema and the killing, and the using a character not from DOA bothered me though, which is why I would take off one star, those things were just creepy.

For a sequel I would really like to see a story that runs parallel to this story. See what happened to Kasumi or Helena, or Lisa and Tina and Ayame. Pair up people in twos or three. Then intersect the stories and end with a big orgy followed by a fight with Zack and the staff over the vidoecameras hidden over the island. It will be awesome.

The character were decribed well and it was easy to get into the story. The plot was good all around and when is this the end?

well done. i truly enjoy the game, and i love the yuri possibilities; possibilities that you illustrated quite well. i have to agree with various other readers; i thought the effects of the enema were a bit much. all-in-all, though, a tremendous fic. and i really like how good your spelling and grammar is; it shows you give a $4!+. bad grammar and spelling always get on my nerves, so again i say arigatou!

Niiiice. The pacing reminds me of H-Games for some reason... and the scenes at the end only add to that. Nice job! Enjoyable read the whole way through.

I thought this story was... wicked!? I mean it was awesome... So good, I read it over and over... Christie is just so.EXY!EXY!? The Christie/Lei thang was so good... *Fans hef off off* A sequel? Hmm... why not on Hitomi and Lei's new life in ChiThenThen have Christie show up... And maybe Christie regrets what she said that night, resulting in envy and/or jealousy. I dunno... Something along those lines maybe. *Shrugs*

Awesome story! 10/10 easily! Mega Brownie Points for Christie/Lei!
We need more Christie stories...*Shifts eyes, grinning* Hmm...
ANYWAY! Gotta bounce!
*Bounces away like a SpongMonkey*

Ever Infamous,
Myo Myo Chan

I love this story! So much potential... and so much yuri! Please update whenever you get the chance. This story has been great from the start. If I had my way, this story would never end! :) Anyhoo, keep up the fantastic work.

nice....continue this dude