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for Twisted Holiday

by Iori

person Mizu Megami
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
once again u ish so very mean T.T i love this fic and have recamended it to a # of my friends. plz update again soon.

:)Mizu:D
person CasualOtaku
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just picked up Kingdom Hearts not to long ago (Yeah, I know, I'm behind the times) and I must say I love this pairing. I love the kinkiness of 'sexy' Sora, and I really, really want to see how this story ends. Is it continued under a different title? Is it ever going to be completed? Oh please oh please say there will be more.
person Jen-chan
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee! Great fic, I love your writing! Pretty-full =^-^= make more! Update! You Rock! don't worry to much about the angst, it can make all the happy bits seem more enjoyable and more interesting to look foward to! ....um, yeah...heh.
person Twinstar1
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I really loved that chapter. I just love how Sora is willing to sacrifice everything for Riku (I would do that same for him too =b). It's just so cute!! Keep writing more. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
^.~
person twisted holiday
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im LOVING IT!!!! this great! and really cute. da only thing i do not like is sora crying and them getting caught and having to stop~_' im bad. love iie yie you write more like this!!!
person Twinstar1
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What an awesome story! I love how original it is compared to a lot of others. I really love that other side of Sora. I think it realy does suit him even though he can hide it very well. I hope you update it soon.
Twinstar1 ^.~
P.S. I love Riku!!!! =b
person Ziri O.
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bounds in with hugs for the SchizoIori* Yaaaay! Updates! Joy and frabjousnesses. I think this is swiftly becoming my favorite Riku/Sora, and it's all because of Halloween Town Sora. Meef. But, in all seriousness, I don't mind a bit of angst, considering the fact that it makes the story a bit more real. The fact that Aeris actually sides with the boys in arguments is really funny. Well, I must go forth, and read the rest! *bounds off*
person Ziri O.
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're on FFN too? Hmmm... *ponders stalking* Anywhuzzles, yeep! Why must you make things so cliff-hangerish and scary(!)? That whole Riku's-channeling-Ansem at the end kinda freaked me out, but it really works to keep the reader locked into the story. I really love how you use subtle little plot devices to keep things gripping. That, and I liked the little touch with Riku's eyes changing to slightly amber when Ansem gains more control.
person Ziri O.
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Meeef. I forgot to mention this earlier, but I really liked the flash-backs to little Sora and Riku. That was a really cute moment. The Hallow Bastion sequence sounded really accurate, but that was a while back for me, too. Ah, well, artistic liscence. Anyway, I was kinda shocked to find you'd updated four chapters whilst I was gone for a few days. But, I can't complain about you not updating like that for a while, considering I'm in my first year at college too. ^--^ It's all about the yumminess of the story, and whether or not it gets finished. Go SchizoIori-san, go! *cheers*
person Ziri O.
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That last chapter's so cute! I was kinda surprised about the little twist with Leon's past, but it's all good in the end. The note was the best part, though. So cute!